Coolio. Liked the imagery though i must say: What're you thinkin' bout? lol. Like it a lot and am very jealous. :P

This is well written so that the flow is quite evident. In addition, you made good use of your diction to create some good imagery in this. I only noticed one punatuation error (I believe a comma should be placed after "enlightenment" in the third line); however, other than that, it reads nicely.

Happy writing ~ CMS

P.S. Thank you for the review :)

This is beautiful. I like the last two lines.

Deep,very deep. I always figured u liked it sweaty =p