You have a good writing style, and I hope you cultivate it wherever life takes you.

Oscar was my cousin, and a good young man. I miss him already.

i loved this. i knew Oscar for 9 years. i've spent the night at his house, eaten dinner there and watched movies with him. i talked to him i think on tuesday or wednesday actually asking if he wanted a ride to school if i saw him walking down the street. that was the first time i talked to him in, i think, a year. i almost went out with him about two years ago when me and our friend Nathan went over to him house for like a week straight. i laid in his arms in the grass in his back yard.. Oscar's best friend Lacyhue [luh-quie] also had his cousin die two years ago from a train accident. Chris King. i'm pretty sure Oscar was his friend too, as was i.

your writing is amazing and im sure that i'll talk to you at school sometime before the year is over.