Still lovin it :) More typos: "“Nira Azard did not beg. Ever.” The enraged hiss startled him. Sin was glaring at him, a quite rage in his eyes." = a quiet rage AND "The bodies of the dead were piled atop one another in a preverbal mountain" = preverbal means before speaking, proverbial means like a proverb etc... *goes onto next story* Just a warning... I'm a grammar/spelling nazi :D

I shall read all your works...eventually :) I noticed a typo!
OKAY:
"He should’ve killed it the moment it stepped through the doors. But the didn’t, because he admitted that he’d never really met a Vampyre before, and he was intrigued…" =
But the didn't? Shouldn't it be But he didn't?
AND
"But he wasn’t. He didn’t need sleep like most did. He almost never slept while on a job, and only a few hours is he did on rare occasions." = That last bit's weird... and only a few hours is he did on rare occasions... and when he he did it was only a few hours on rare occasions?
But I love it :)

wow, this sound like real fantasy. skilled writing, interesting characters and intrigue. i like it. :)

You are actually a wonderful writer! I'm surprised no one has discovered you yet. Ah well, the only thing I would suggest is that you spruce up ur summaries a bit!

Keep writing and good luck!

Such an interesting tale I have stumbled upon and with basically the first sentence you have me interested. I can see a lot of detail and thought in this and I really like where this is going and I'm interested to see what is going to happen.

I also read your profile and for the manga/anime fan and work being influenced by that. I know 100 percent where you are coming from.

Cheers,
Aqua

This story is amazing, quite horrifying, but the trill gives it some uniqueness!

FAVS! -runs like a fan girl-