|Reviews for Failed|
| yuanyuan 5/28/10 . chapter 1
Cheap retail watch, sunglasses, belt, hats/caps, High quality T-shirts,ED hardy t-shirts,ED Hardy hoodies,ED hardy ,Jeans,GUCCI shoes,LV Handbag,Chanel Handbag…high quality,low to:
| broken from the past 3/25/09 . chapter 1
It's a pretty good poem and I like it.
| Thornprick 3/8/09 . chapter 1
it's sad, a good poem :). :'(
| Lilja Ruusu 3/7/09 . chapter 1
I loved the part "Have I failed you now?" It was brilliantly written, and it flows together nicely! D
| kage-youkai girl 3/6/09 . chapter 1
wow. I liked it. Great work.
| WhatAboutDolly 3/6/09 . chapter 1
Well I think it's about a person who's trying to fight their way through life. And the sword symbolizes their heart, which has been through so much strain that it's tired of hurting and trying. I really like this. Good Job (:
| ForeverBehindTheImpression 3/6/09 . chapter 1
Great stuff :) I really do like your poems, I adore the whole right side then in the middley bit. Im sure it has a name, but im not that genius :) Very cool stuff, You keep on writing :)