LMFAO that was great! Halcyon can certainly make an entrance. At first I though he was naked from the way Eternity screamed, that would have been awesome . . . Imagine if he was ** or something in Eternity's bathroom, like, to the smell of him on the towels or whatever? LoL you see how good slash perverts my mind. Anyway, good job once again. Write quickly, I go into withdrawls . . . now.

You're very good at character development. No matter how briefly any of them are encountered you get a clear image and outline of their personality. There's a lot of potential in you. On a more prurient note, I delight in Eternity's perv-magnet status and Halcyon's wandering hand. I think i know what animal that creepy Rex guy is too . . . does it have feathers by chance? Anyway, good work. Keep up the delights, my dear.

Yay!! *dances around like goofball in happiness caused at satisfying story*

Queen of slash. That is your name now.

Yes, I know this review does not make nay sense. That is the personal high you have driven me into with your delightful chapters. I will bug you until days' end with my worship.

I love how snotty your characters are. I spend the whole time I read your chapters grinning madly and cackling. Halycon is very sexy- I love that name, by the way- and cannot wait to see what he turns into. What color are his eyes? Just curious, why was Eternity in a chemise? I thought he hated looking like a girl. Not that I mind though, lol the mental image is fantastic.

And so are you. Don't ever stop writing. You're great.

One tiny thing . . . why did Eternity wipe a paw over his 'mussel'? That's a shellfish. Maybe you meant 'muzzle'? *meek look* I ask with love . . .

Oh . . . *licks lips*

I'm in such a daze of enjoyment from reading this one that I can't properly word it. I will merely say, AWESOME! and that i look forwards to reading the rest. :3

Oh my, I like this very much. Eternity is quite enjoyably snarky, one of my favorite char types, and the description of him is mouth-watering.

My other greatest love in a story is snappy dialogue, which you have nailed spot-on. Both thumbs and toes up to you, my girl.

I must also admit to enjoying your own commentary just as much as the story. Your blunt practicality reminds me of the people I like the most; I think I'm going to like you very much. Kudos on the end reply, telling the psycologist what-for. I was cheering in my seat. Finally, someone who appreciates exotic names and beautiful emmasculate boys! You are hereby on my favorites list.

*air kisses*

Whats next, whats next?

Veru funny - like their interactions. I adore Eternity, munch.

Bloody nice ending for a chap.

Halcyon's line in here just rocks and cracks me up. Brillant.

mucha amor

Your teaser makes me so eager to read more. Hurry up and update already.

Wow! You are BACK!

Oh my GOD, I can't belive you chose to do this scene in a bloody TOILET! You are just soo mean to your characters but you've got me squealing like a kid!! Yoohoo, way to go!! What's next??

PLease update fast!
Narq.

Haha! Echo comes in! You finally put him in! I can't wait to see what'll happen with Eternity, Echo and Halcyon (or is the love triangle a different thing?).

Aww, home schooled Eternity! What a picture! Cute! I was told that home schooling had a lot more benefits than going to real school, which is so not fairr~! OMG and poor Eternity. I could imagine a younger him just cowering in fear at the thought of bullies on his first day. My heart aches for you, dear one! -clutches heart in a spaz movement- Aww and to have to attend a hospital instead of school... that's horrible. I bet that just ruined it...

Haha, and such a cute nickname for two "best friends". Both of their names start with an E LOL.

OMG! THE LAST PART WAS HILARIOUS! XD I could just imagine Halcyon doing that! It is so him!

Thanks for the update hun. I so needed it. I've been having an awful two weeks... -.-

ZOMG You updated! Putting a teaser is so mean, it makes me anticipate, and now I know you'll take a year to update just to be mean. -Dies-
If you take too long, I will find you, and kill you, painfully, very painfully.
=-=

Oh my giddy gosh! I was so excited to see the new chapter. I thought to PM you but I thought i wold be a bugger -__- I am super glad you are back ^^

I am happy to see Eternity again, and i finally meet this Echo^^ Yay. He is nice^^

I think you need a transition mark when you start to talk about how they met^^

How old is Eternity? If he first met Echo in high school and still is in high school, 8 years is too big of a number...

This was cute chapters, you had a few typos but that's normal, I am a royalty of typos lol. School starts next week for me too and I have college classes gah, :P Anyways can't wait for more ^^

Wow...in the toilet. lol. That is just great! This was a very cute chapter. I liked the review of Echo and Eternity's past together. You did a very good job!


~much love and many hugs~

Niki!

oh you little tease! you just had to stop at such a good part. By the way, i really like the story. Halcyon is such a meanie, i love the way he bullies Eternity XD. I hope the next chapter comes along soon!