whoa, u said this is based off of you?? oh my god, im sorry! that's horrible...

Nice twist. Don't forget to update...

this story is amazing! I wondir wat happened to ellie... i've met over-smothering people b4, it's awful! it's like u can't breathe!

i think T is fine.
love this chapter. your a really good writer!
:D

good job!
ill look forward to the 2 chapter!

it sounds really good so far, i think i'll ♥ this story..

Really good and it doesn't have any glaring grammar errors, nothing I picked up on just reading it