|Reviews for zen and the art of eggs, sunny side up|
| Faithless Juliet 1/8/10 . chapter 1
I love the title of your piece first off - I adore long titles.
I feel like this poem was a bit off kilter, which I liked, but I also felt like I couldn’t quite pin down your overall message. I couldn’t interpreter a solid meaning for the overall piece.
A few of the sections don’t make since as is: ‘we alive, and we mortal few’ I feel like something more should come in the ‘we alive’ section. Keep up the good work.
| Moondog Dozier 3/19/09 . chapter 1
Great sound and progression. I like how the compact structure enhances the quick hitting nature of the tone. Good write. MD:77.
| abstractelysium 3/7/09 . chapter 1
| alkfhdakjd1 3/7/09 . chapter 1
Every time I read a poem of yours I just love your poetry even more. I don't think I've ever been disappointed by anything that you've written. ]
| Ernest Bloom 3/7/09 . chapter 1
i like this sequel, or rather,
this footnote, or rather, the
twain in tandem, or rather, the
clarification, the exegesis. i
wonder why we both felt compelled
to write abt protection today; i
guess it's cos the wind out there
is so cold right now. we mortal
few, and the expectations of
england. the weight of our
burden called being alive.