hiya

This is an interesting idea. I can imagine someone waiting for a bus and composing this in their head.

I rather liked your first two lines...I was initially wondering why you would say ..oh transport and not oh bus or taxi or something...but I guess you were waiting for either a taxi or a bus eh? I liked the 2nd line though. It would have been funnier (for me, ha!) if you had continued in this type of language...sort of like a parody of a serious poem but on a mundane subject:)

"Taxis pass as a full bus"--> Not sure I understand this line...you meant that the taxis that passed were full?
"A distant maxi"--> Did you mean a distant taxi?

I liked the flow of this, it had good rhyming rhythm and is easy to read.

Good job
Suzanna from the review game Marathon (see link in profile)
oh btw from Trinidad eh? Cool :)