That's hilarious. I love the idea of that. It's thoughtful, though. It's also really observant. Good job on noticing that, I guess!

I like the one-word lines. They're scattered and sharp sounding when you read it. They have a staccato feel to them as the rhythm. It's nice.

I'm not sure if I love the double-spaces. I don't hate them, but they're pretty bland. (Hold shift while pressing enter or backspace to single-space up or down.)

-Katie, from the Review Marathon (link's in the profile!)