Looks like whatever powers Lo has are developing. I bet they'll get even better though. And no problem about Rikei. In fact, we can discuss him being permanent if you want.

Man do I need to catch up. This chapter had a nice calm, alluring effect on it. Tingly. I wish I could do that with my stories, good job.

So now they're breaking and entering, things are starting to look risky for them

Wow, things are getting mysterious, I love how your stories all do that.

Oh sounds likie things are going to get really good and actiony soon. Nice.

Cool chapter, things are starting to get mysterious with Lo's powers coming in.

Wow, things are really heating up now, aren't they.

Keep up the good work.

Another excellent chapter, keep up the good work.

Lo and Hero are a violent pair. Good chapter.

Oh, interesting chapter and not a bad fight either. Good chapter.

It seems short but it was good. Keep updating both stories though!

I can't wait to see what's going on.

Ouch, someone's in a pinch.

This seems a lot more serious than your other story, I can't wait to read more.

Good first chapter. Gave a good deal of action while still keeping things shrouded.

Interesting start to this story. I can't wait to see where everything os going to go and I really hope you keep it up.

NICE!

That was really good man. Intense and exhilarating!

Hope to see more from this story soon.