I just want to say that it's rather sad that you have such a skewed view of God. To each his own, I suppose.

Although I am a Christian I have to say this is a great poem.

Some excellent points being made, e.g. reference to turning the other cheek. (Unlike most poems of the sort which drone on without any real arguments..) And the metaphor is a really original idea.

I guess this is the first atheist (or atheist-inclined?) poem on fictionpress that has actually got a point across to me P Well done!

fleur

I SO completely relate to every word in this.

i actually found this quite funny. In an ironic sort of way.