|Reviews for No More|
| Brenda Agaro 3/9/09 . chapter 1
I like the flow of this. The only things are the lack of punctuation (should there be a period after "when I'm losing"?) and I find "ice cold knife" to be overused - I can suggest a stronger word choice/imagery if you want.
| Snowflakes Are Drifting 3/9/09 . chapter 1
| Lilja Ruusu 3/9/09 . chapter 1
"How would you see the
carving inside my heart"