I loved this story. It was so sad, but somehow...fulfilling? It wasn't one of those stories that made you hate the author for ruining the ending, the ending somehow fit (even though it was so sad, it was still sweet, especially when they remembered their past lives as angels, at the end).

I loved how Erin wasn't wallowing in guilt because of their relationship, she knew that she loved Ian, and that was that. And Ian is so sweet ^.^

This reminded me a lot of Angel Sanctuary, not just the angel/incest thing, but also the characters. I started reading, and i was like 'omg! It's like a remixed Angel Sanctuary!' so yeah. (just had to say that X-D)

Okay, This is the fourth thing I've read from you and I must say this. YOURE A GREAT FREAKING WRITER!
Your stories aren't all stereotypical and predictable but they still end very well. Amazing, that's what they are!

that was a motivating story to see two ppl in luv but had no chance to live it till they died

This...REALLY made me cry...
It's not fair - it's not fair if all you have in your life is sadness and pain to have someone there with you to bring you happiness, even if it is your twin, it should be ALLOWED!!
Whether as Angels OR Humans they still couldn't be together, this isn't fair at ALL...!! *Crying*
Anywaiis I personally think points to consider would be, what's so wrong in loving your sibling...and WHY right?! Even if it considered taboo...
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What a beautiful story! Well-written, too.

Originally, I had thought this story would end with some kind of "I love you forever" kind of thing, but this, "they remembered EVERYTHING" bit really hit the spot. In a way, it's like they're saying the ultimate goodbye and iloveyous with that one look, while also doing justice to each other by remembering all that they've been through together.

Bravo!

I know that incest is a big no-no, and even cousins are not supposed to marry each other nowadays. However, I am happy that you are bold enough to break this taboo in such a beautifully written story. I have predicted that Erin and Ian are doomed lovers, but I have never expected the plane to crash... :( Nevertheless, I feel comforted, since they have "remembered everything", and I guess that they will become angels once more.

Incest~~! Well, their love is really against all odds. But that's how it is. Poor Erin and Ian. :(

:/ :l :( that was quite depressing ):

So sad but really good I love it, but it was kind of weird that they were brothers but hey I am not here to judge on love.

Oh, wow, Ian and Erin were seriously screwed over. lol, That's the simplest way I could put it XD. As angels, "NO LOVING!" As humans, "NO LOVING, DAMNIT!" Gosh, the poor guys. It's like they didn't get to enjoy life at all, despite how strongly they felt for each other. Truly, that is suffering, to feel that you don't deserve happiness, because that's such a /lie/. Everyone deserves happiness, and can achieve it because happiness comes from within and is therefore under our own control, yadda yadda XD. Sorry for preaching (or whatever I was doing just now O.o).

lol, As you can see, I enjoyed this story tremendously. I got so wrapped up in it that I even had to /rant/ after I'd finished reading it XD.

SMOOCHES! Love you, nee-chan!

Awesome. I'll be honest. That was much better than I expected. I honestly hadn't planned on it being so amazingly captivating but again, you've proven your writing abilities to be more than just astounding. I'm very, very impressed.

Keep up the great work. I look forward to future works.

Farukh

I am so grateful to love someone who ISN'T related to me.

I do frown on brother and sister love, but in this story, it was really cute and really a good story. It showed how people are; they are very close-minded with anything that they are afraid of and very ignorant because they do not know. I'll read your stories no matter what they're about anyway! ^.^

That was just so heart-wrenchingly brilliant. I'm crying now. It's true it shouldn't be a sin. I mean Cliopatra's parents were brother and sister. History it seems has been unkind to love. That was an amazing story. So truthful and sad, yet so sweet and in love and just so...WOW!
frizzle
p.s. so adding it to my favourites

that was the most heart breaking story ever out there.
it made me cry.. :'(
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