Strange, but I like it

i really enjoyed reading this =) very unique way of approaching the idea of the devil. i find that the way you write makes your stories easy to digest and good to read. thumbs up.

happy writing! =)

ok i'm redoing this for the RG and giving u why i liked those two parts:

i liked jones description because it really gave me a feel for the character. The way you did it also described the feelings of the people around him and not just him, so i thought it was a nice touch to the story.

i liked the ending because it was a really good twist you threw it. it was really brilliant lol, to play in the "animosity" (not the word i was looking for, but it works) between the Devil and Michael (along with all the other angels). and it was rather unexpected, since i really wondered how Jones was going to win against the devil with a coin flip.

interesting ending. it was really fun read. i'm wondering if this is the end? or will u continue it?

i really like all the descriptions of Jones in the beginning. however, i feel like it's too distant. maybe you should put in more of Jones feelings and not just describe him from the point of the onlookers.

also, when the devil first made its appearance, u described using Bill and call him "dickhead", but then suddenly he was the Devil. i feel like there should some some sort of transition of the devil's "label" from dickhead to his real identity. it just felt like a big jump from one pov to another.

but overall, i really liked the ending. good job!

Oh the Michael thing totally makes sense! I know a lot about the Bible, including the Michael and his angels and the great war in heaven and all that stuff (did you know that Michael and Adam are the same guy?). That is so cool that you are able to use tidbits like that to help your story. It makes it seem very well thought out and intellegent.
I liked the characters. They seem very real and deep and interesting. I'm interested to see how someone can be a "former" demon. Jones/Catskill seems like a really cool character.

Interesting turn of events. Good luck, I like it!1
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