Oh. I like this. A lot. It's words I use and the type of phrasing I use, so yes. Love love the "headaches in the sky," and then "salt and sleep and awake." Not sure about the title, but I'm assuming that's more of a personal statement, something for you or this other person, than anything else. Still. Lovely. Keep writing! :)

i like this, i can even almost imagine it as a song, short as it is! like a goldfrapp or moby style song. hmm nice :)