Well i think it is good. made me want to eat some honey afterwards. good job :)

*gasp!* (i seem to gasp alot, but anyway...) u mentioned me! wow... *amazing feeling*
now, onto the actual POEM...
my favorite line was definently "Somewhere a flower smiles/ Clear, so pure it’s almost nothing,/ Like a lover’s sleeping lips."
i could totally visualize it, and "a flower smiles" is a really cool way to use personification. :)
but i didn't get the "yes" part.
other than that, good job!

Peace.