;-; poor theo... poor maho ;-; Love it, but it was so sad... ;-;

Wow. Just wow. That was way intense and so sad. Once again your descriptions and your atmosphere are top notch. The description of the bugs under his skin was way creepy and extremely well done.

I knew that it was horror going into it that generally doesn’t have a happy ending … but as I read I just kept hoping, hoping, hoping that it might not be a REAL horror. I felt so bad for Theo, so very, very bad for Theo which means you did a good job! Honestly, I was a little mad at Maho, and I would almost be glad he bit it at the end if that didn’t hurt Theo so much. Poor, poor Theo.

*Laughs* I think you should write an alternate ending! I’m sure it would beautiful. ^_~

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O_O

Holy mother of a monkey, I love angsty, romantic horror stories. This makes me want to go read things like the Fairy Tales of the Brothers Grimm. I love things like this. It's almost like a morbid fascination.

I especially loved the sense of irony in this. It's just... just... wow.

-goes back to re-read-

~ANT-chan