this is just awesome! please please write more, soon! =)

hehe i like this story.. it will be interesting to read moree! update soon please!=]

omg total cliffie! not fair i really like it u cant stop!

awsome beyond all belief! :)

Quite an interesting chapter. Here she comes to except some of her "new" family. Your diolog flows really well which helps in a good story. You could possiably work on your discription, in terms of adding a little bit more, but for now it works. Well done. I truly enjoyed it =)

i really like this story.i would like you to continue it.i just started writing my own story and am kinda new to this.your story is actually my first to review and i have to say i really like it and would love to see where it goes.

this is really interesting

I love this story so far and cannot wait for you to continue!

hiya

great chapter, keep going don't stop. Things looks like they are going to get interesting. :)

I hope you don't mind but i found a error i thought i would point it out to you.

"Trevor, you can take the kids in your car and I'll but her bags in the bed of my truck and ride home with you mother." Trevor nodded and I rolled my bag to Bill's truck where he grabbed the bag from me and tossed it into the bed. - in this sentence at the bottom of the chapter you have... and ride home with you mother when it should be ride home with your mother.

Hope that helps.

Angel

Cute idea, naming the twins Ben and Jerry. I really like this story so far, update soon!

~enchanting eclipse~

Haha, they should have warned, god! --smiles-- ooh, I love it. UPDATE SOON! Watch your spelling, but other than that? Very nice.

Keep Writing,

xxTunstall Chickxx

I just gotta say,
i love...naw...adore this story.
woah.^^
just please keep writing, im begging on my knees, if u want me to.xD
the idea of the story ist just that hot, and i already love trevor^^
just please, write more xD
and dont u ever think of not finishing the story, yeah?
:)

kisses

Ha Ben and Jerry!

Okay I'm a bit confused of who's who so could you tell m the stepbrothers and there ages again? Bill is her father right? Good job!! :)

i think that the idea for this story is really good.
its cool so far, maybe a little fast but it seems like it could be realy good :]
keep going. ;]

Aww...great story! Keep updating !

xx