|Reviews for The Diary of Lily Adams|
| Hehe-Blixie 4/24/09 . chapter 3
lol isnt proving parents wrong fun!
| Wynter WolfSong 4/13/09 . chapter 2
lol SHE STOLE MY PENCIL! IT'S NOT RIGHT! hahaha great story i love it
| jammi 4/13/09 . chapter 3
HAHAHAHAH, she's plotting to mess with Lucy but has no idea why she has to spend time in the office.
I'm assuming Hula-hoops are chips? because the only hula hoops i know go around your hips and you wind as fast as you can so they don't fall. Not edible snacks.
[I’m on cloakroom duty.]
LOL, that line alone says so much about her. Just snooping around in people's stuff.
[Andrew painted a huge question mark on Jenny Greenbank’s forehead today and raised his eyebrows at me, so I tackled Lucy Walters to the floor and wrote, ‘Sure’ on her forehead and then Andrew and me burst out laughing.
I have detention again now.]
ROTFLMAO! guess her diary wasn't good enough.
Really cute story, I full on connect with the character who has some bully tendencies and it reminds me of my child hood antics, though i was more subtle, LOL, and the voice is realistic for her age and j'adore it.
| jammi 3/11/09 . chapter 2
LOL, Lily is a bully, hahaha, and I love the fact she drops the girl over a pencil. and LMAO at her calling Alex violent when she DROPPED HER! AND TIED HER SHOES TOGETHER!, lmao.
I love the way she uses 'it's not right' as a way to explain everything. You don't need to go any further than those words to get the full gist.
[I have to go to assembly soon, but I don’t want to. I don’t know if I like God anymore.
Why would he let someone so annoying as Lucy Walters exist if he was so nice?
She’s a THIEF!]
From the girl who laughs at others misfortunes on the regular, LOL.
[And then he came and sat by me under the sink and talked to me and said he was sorry for trying to go to our secret place without an invitation.
I forgave him, because he stole me an extra doughnut from lunch – the ones with the chocolate in them.
He said he won’t come to our secret place again unless he has an invitation.
Which he’s NEVER going to get, because all three of us have to decide when we can invite someone new into our secret place, and I’m certainly not letting him come.
I think he’s funny and he’s a good mate. But he’s not allowed.]
| nonaccount 3/11/09 . chapter 1
This is really amusing.
I wonder what is going to happen next?
| jammi 3/10/09 . chapter 1
This is honestly one of the funniest stories I've read, LOL, like going through I spend the majority of the time actually laughing out loud.
[Lucy Walters should be with Aalish Harding! She actually managed to get off with the entire Monopoly game!
All in one go as well!
She didn’t even do it a piece at a time!
That’s what I would have done, if I were her. Just steal it in instalments – that way no one would know.]
LMAO at her giving her views on how to steal a Monopoly board. At least we can see it worked for Aalish to go one go at a time, no need to worry abotu missing any bits if you just take it all. HAHAH
HAHAH, whenever someone does something she doesn't like/she gets in trouble for laughing at their misfortune she hates them, haha, brings back soo many memories. hahah, I especially love the fact that she compares everything she does to either Lucy or Aalish's work, I remember doing that as a kid. When it's your friends you can wear the same thing as them and it's cool, anyone else does and they're copy cats.
[She was shouting that I shouldn’t listen into other people’s private conversations. And I was shouting that it wasn’t me. BECAUSE IT WASN’T.
IT WAS LIZZY! I didn’t ask her to listen in!
Mummy and daddy are shouting now. I can’t really hear what they’re saying.
Thursday 2nd September – on the window ledge
Mummy and daddy are in the dining room with the glass doors open, and I’ve opened my window, so I can hear what they’re saying now.]
I love the fact that the reason she's locked in her room [the excuse her mom gave] is because she listen's in on people's conversations, and what is it she does? Opens her window so she can listen in on her parent's conversation, LOL, though her mother over reacted massively.
Especially since she thought only Lizzy was going away, it would've been a bigger/better surprise if she was all sad then BAM! learns she's going along as well. [She is going with right? That's what I got from the fact that her mother was involved in the convo and the surprise bit.]
[I like God, but I don’t know. There’s something not right.]
LOL, I can full on see the unsure face here, hahah.
[We just went out on a hack with the ponies and then did the stables and groomed and fed the horses. Can you imagine Jenny Greenbank on a horse! Hahahaha, she would just fall off, she’s so spindly and inflexible.
I wish she would ride a horse now.
Just so me and Lizzy could laugh at her.]
HAHAHAHAH, she's such a mean little child, hahaha, spindly and inflexible, haha.
[I don’t think I should tell anybody that though.
Just incase she tries to give me away.
She always says that she will if I’m a bad girl.
But she’s a bad mum.
And I don’t say I’ll give her away.
I can’t get rid of her.
I don’t know who’d want her.]
HAHAHA, she doesn't know who'd want her, haha, nice.
Great first chapter, very amusing and it'll be interesting to see where it goes.