Alright so first off, I'm wondering how I haven't found you yet. But this story was good. It was short and sweet and to the point - this is a lot of the reason I like one shots. Seriously though, it's hard to find just a short fic with no smut.

I'm not a huge fan of songfics. The lyrics tend to distract me a little bit. That's just me. But the lyrics did go well with the story so I have to congratulate you on picking a good song.

Again, great one shot. It was put together very nicely for something you wrote at 10 at night.

-xXDarkDeception600Xx

WHAT A cute story! OMG! Now I feel like jumping into a water fall too! It feels so good. (oh dear, my nature loving attitude is back! LOVE NATURE) It was nice to add the little poem in there. Nice story!

That was adorable and TOTALLY cute.
What was the song? (assuming it was one) because I now want to listen to it...
Out of interest, boyxboy or boyxgirl... it was hard to tell.
Not that it would have made much differance either way.

Aww, how sweet. :)
Very cute.
I'm not entirely too keen on the fictionpress thing, (I'm a girl) and this was the first story to pop out to me. :D
—Midnight