|Reviews for Fill The Pages|
| Steph 4/19/09 . chapter 4
Aw that lady is nice. One thing: call it a baby not a babe. That irritates me lol. So easily annoyed... XD
Well done. Good story. Update soon!
| Steph 4/19/09 . chapter 3
Aw! OMFC this actually made me cry. Mind you, I cry at quite a lot so... I'm gonna shut up now because I want to read the next chapter :P
| Steph 4/19/09 . chapter 2
Oh I've read this one. Haha. Janet XD You gotta love her!
| Steph 4/19/09 . chapter 1
I have decided to come on here and review all of your chapters because I much prefer here to bebo XD. And also because I feel like being kind.
That's actually really touching, especially the bit in italics. Wow, polly has emotions- didn't see that one coming :P XD
| Livy Love 3/26/09 . chapter 2
I realy love this story as it has alot of emotion.
| criti-sized 3/18/09 . chapter 2
I really like your narration. It's really smooth and seems to flow. There were a few things that felt a bit rushed, like the dailogue between the two friends, but nothing else. There was also a small lack of description, which could've made the chapter great.
| criti-sized 3/18/09 . chapter 1
This is an interesting beginning to a story. Though the preface does exactly what it's supposed to and catches the readers attention, it seems to pack a serioud punch to it as well.
| KJayy L 3/12/09 . chapter 3
i think its fabulous! but as i said too much of a rush but its stil;l fabby babby ;]