Great song! :) Keep writing!

~Anna~ ^_^

Very heartfelt and sad. I'd love to see it drawn out.

Your punctuation is all over the place. You have none in the first stanza and the rest you punctuate as if the stanza is a sentence, but it isn't unless you count a run-on.

"For the first time in a while"... awhile

I think the piece is really relateable. I also think the message was nice, very uplifting. The piece itself was nice, but I have to say a tad cliched. I might try to describe things a bit differently, more uniquely. Still interesting piece.

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This is really angsty and emotive. I love it. The chorus is perfect, it flows well. I can really imagine it. I know a lot of people will relate to this/take hope from this.

This is very good. Touches the soul, sad, but true. You can't stay in a painful relationship; its bad for the heart...

I like it! You can definitly tell it comes from an actual experience because of the emotion.

-Kaitrin