I like this! :)

I really like how you start out with one perspective, seem to "lose" yourself, and then return back. I love this:
"Mirror, Mirror, on the wall
I'll be it al
The beachy babe on the sand
The runway models, oh so grand"

Very nice, I really like it =)
Great job!

Oh wow...I like that, friend! And it DID rhyme!

It actually makes me feel a little better about myself...

~Meg