Lol wow sounds like me when im dissociated xP. I swear i have some random stuff like this written down somewhere :/

Luved it though. the start is brilliant *adds to favs* :) gd read!

TTW x

Very nice work! I really enjoyed this.

-GS

Ohh, oh, I love this. Kudos to you!

This is magnificent. Your vocabulary is electrifying, and your brain bounces so much.. I love your metaphors and the way you skip through this, the lines kept short..

I'm sorry I'm so terrible at reviews. When I like something, I feel the need to let the author know. But I couldn't tell you distinctly why I like it any more than this. Sorry! Just know that it's wonderful and lovely, one of my favorite lines is "We are so empty, filled with scars," and I'm adding it to my favorites [:

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Katie

That is very good. You're right, it does paint a very vivid picture. Especially as it draws to a close. Excellent metaphor and the likes of.

Mind giving mine a read? Toxic is my new baby, and a practise in metaphor, also, at least it turned out to be...

So, anyhow, excellent job.

Love,

Vanity.