Thanks for sharing this story, it's such a nice take on a fairy tale and very well written. I loved it!

This is adorable~ I love it.

Very Cute. I'm a fan.

Hehe cute! Definatly cute! hehe Godfatehr sounds so FUNNY! I think he was grumpy when his charges leave because hi missed them... dude all the animals liked him! It reminded me of Snow White! And wouldent his father or whoever know he was missing and at least DO something? I mean... im pretty sure they didnt tell wnyone where they were going?

Sweet, delightful, adorable; I loved it.

adorable! i really truly enjoyed this. slashed-up fairy tales are the best. Awsome work.

Lighthearted and fanciful. Thanks for the smiles!

Love, love, love, loved it! But then, I pretty much love all your stories. XD Wonderful job. =)

Good piece of writing. Fantastic light read. Kept me chuckling from beginning to end.
This is one of the cutest little treasures I've had the pleasure to set my eyes on.
You've gained a fan.

Aw, so cute. :)

This was adorable! I love the fairy tale trials flipped on their heads. This was such a fun read :)

This was adorable. It kept me amused all the way through, what with the woodland creatures (hah, George the female cow) and all the mishaps and especially Irian himself. I liked the way Vel was like some of the princesses and filled in their roles, like with the ball, the woodland creatures flocking around him, and the whole Princess and the Frog thing.

There was great flow too, I never found myself skimming or stopping despite the length of this one-shot. I liked the continuity of the breakfast thing and how it rewound back to the ending. Even better, I found no grammatical errors and that made it all more awesome.

Despite being a one-shot, I did like how you included background information and "worldbuilding" in a way, like with the Fairy Godmother/Father things. I do have to wonder, though; you said one of the Fairy Godmothers was around 9500 years old, so I guess humans have been existing for as long, but it's still in the medieval stages? Ah well, this is fantasy, logic be damned for the sake of fluff, haha.

Even though I knew what the ending was going to be, I enjoyed reading through their whole little journey and their Happily Ever After. It would've been amusing if you'd ended it with that, haha.

Well, just to sum it up nicely, I'm putting this on my Favorites.

AWW!! That's so cute!

This was so amazing!I will be that much biased to say that I never expected any less from you since I've gotten to read most of your stories over the months and know your style...I loved both Vel and Irian,they were both so clueless,confused, shy and cute.I love your characters,you manage to give them so much personality with seemingly no effort and in such a short story as this one :)The idea is awesome and so very unique...Ah,just in a simple word--this story is gorgeous!

Aw, cutest thing ever! I love it. And a very nice parody of all the fairy tales. Love and adoration!