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Peachesandcream15 2009-09-29 . chapter 1
This is good, I liked the last line "Please say you'll remember that I ruined this."
a silenced revolution 2009-03-30 . chapter 1
I like the long lines. I think it adds to the strong, emotional tone of it. The speaker isn't hesitating to say what there is to be said, and it strikes me as a very honest, regretful, bittersweet piece. Nice.
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