This one was a little strange to me. I guess the last line threw me off a little. It was a good little poem and it kind of made me think towards the end. Great job.

I love how you wrote this, Great work.

Oh, I like this a lot. And it kind of reminds me of the novel "Diary of A Drug Fiend" by Aleister Crowley. You summed up addiction in an compressed, yet haunting and brutally real way. Great job.