Some single-spaced stanzas would look better with this. The double-spaces spread out your thoughts too much and some single-spaces would tie it all in better. (Hold shift while pressing enter or backspace to single-space up or down.)

Your poem is pretty, it really is. Your words are well written and have beautiful imagery. My only problem is that there's hardly any rhythm in it. I love free verse. But I just think that maybe some internal rhymes or some alliteration would give this very pretty poem a more poetic feel. ;D

Thanks for posting!
-Katie, from the Review Marathon (link's in the profile!)

It's alright. I'm just personally not a big fan of non-rhyming poems but this is okay. Although I noticed that the only part of Night you covered was darkness. What about nocturnal animals,or the silence of night, or all the noises that you could never hear in the day.