| Reviews for Apple of Discord |
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Scarlett Smile 4/13/09 . chapter 1The title is what initially drew me in because it is a creative title. However, your words are very angst-ridden and I like that at the end you put "so thank you for makin' my life so interesting", that's some added spice that I really liked to this poem :) |
Emylie Giovanna Graivs 4/1/09 . chapter 1This is amazingly how I feel right now, your words hit right where I'm sure you meant them to. Very Nicely Done. |
Little girl Big world 3/15/09 . chapter 1I liked this I liked how you talked about there life being predictable. And the line, "I know what road to take though I don't get far." Amazing. Good work |
Living Life Free 3/15/09 . chapter 1This has happens to me before. I hate it when others talk shit too! Great poem. |
Elizabeth Alan 3/14/09 . chapter 1Your fury is almost contagious! |
Isca 3/13/09 . chapter 1It's ridiculous how people have nothing better to do than to make fun of others. Ignore them. They're not worth your time. :) "The Apple of Discord." Brilliant line! |
Lilja Ruusu 3/12/09 . chapter 1"'cause my life isn't too circus to entertain you and all your people." great lines, I really liked all of it. Even the bad words made it interesting! |
Erlkoenigin 3/12/09 . chapter 1du sagst es selbst: ein schönes Gedicht! Wie geht es dir und deinem Vater? |