|Reviews for Apple of Discord|
| Scarlett Smile 4/13/09 . chapter 1
The title is what initially drew me in because it is a creative title. However, your words are very angst-ridden and I like that at the end you put "so thank you for makin' my life so interesting", that's some added spice that I really liked to this poem :)
| Emylie Giovanna Graivs 4/1/09 . chapter 1
This is amazingly how I feel right now, your words hit right where I'm sure you meant them to. Very Nicely Done.
| Little girl Big world 3/15/09 . chapter 1
I liked this I liked how you talked about there life being predictable. And the line, "I know what road to take though I don't get far." Amazing. Good work
| Living Life Free 3/15/09 . chapter 1
This has happens to me before. I hate it when others talk shit too! Great poem.
| Elizabeth Alan 3/14/09 . chapter 1
Your fury is almost contagious!
| Isca 3/13/09 . chapter 1
It's ridiculous how people have nothing better to do than to make fun of others. Ignore them. They're not worth your time. :)
"The Apple of Discord." Brilliant line!
| Lilja Ruusu 3/12/09 . chapter 1
"'cause my life isn't too circus
to entertain you and all your people."
great lines, I really liked all of it. Even the bad words made it interesting!
| Erlkoenigin 3/12/09 . chapter 1
du sagst es selbst: ein schönes Gedicht!
Wie geht es dir und deinem Vater?