Wow. This is like the best thing you've ever written. It is my absolute favorite. The prose is beautiful, vivid, powerful. In short, amazing. Great work Dillio-chan!

Sherms

Very good. The metaphor was lovely, and the statements, too true. Review some of my stuff if you get a moment? Sorry, haha, Bend me Break Me, Moonlit Beauty, and Toxic are my new babies and I feel compelled to push them on people...

But yes, it was quite good.

Vanity