I want a Lucan! Oh my god, I want one, WANT, WANT, WANT!

This story is written just as well as 'Hiring a Hooligan' but the characters are so different and I want to give you HUGE kudos on that. So many authors can only write with one kind of plot, or setting, or character. You've shown that you can do way more than that so... case in point, you're pretty awesome. So are ALL of your characters (not just Lucan, even though I do have some major hots for him).

Jeez louise *fans at her face* do you know how to build up the tension before any hanky panky! I love how comfortable she is with being sexually attracted to the guy. Who, clearly, from the sounds of it seem attractive to any woman. Maybe even seem attractive to inanimate objects.
I'm saving finishing reading Hiring A Hooligan as it's pretty much my favourite story in all of Fiction Press so can't face the prospect of having read and finished it all.
Please please keep up your amazing writing-ness! I keep laughing to myself about it way loads (Navleen's banter and wittyness is surely A* standard) and will more than likely be day dreaming about a Lucan type non stop.
I promise to personally punch anyone in the bread basket that plagarises your work. And do all those things Navleen's Mum threatened to do to Penser!
THANKS FOR BEING AWESOME AND STUFF!
P.S. Out of all the guys you've written, if you had to have a fling with one of them, date one for a while and marry the other, who'd you pick? Just being nosey!

update!

This reader demands that the author updates immediately to avoid a potential mob-rising by the readers.

The ullu ka patha cracked me up. Mainly cuz I know someone who says ullu ka kutta instead. And the funniest thing about that is that that guy is a FOB.

God I this!
But I write oh-fo as uffo. I don't know, it just makes more sense to me.

Your story is amazing!
i would deffinately marry lucan!
:P

Omg i cant tell you how much i connect with this story.
Im indian to and i've never had anyone tell stories that i could laugh about and be like that happened to me last week!

Really being a girl in America or Canada
with indian parents is like a roller coster. lol
I LOVE YOU

I have probably read this story about 6 times already and everytime I do I laugh just as hard as the time before! I love Lucan, in HAH I loved him and his flirting with janie who didnt get the fact that he was flirting, I knew she would end up with Rafe so I hoped that you would write a story about Lucan cause he´s the **(my vocab isnt that elaborate this time at night) and here it is and I absolutely adore this story. It's funny, sexy, smart and all that good stuff. I love Navleen cause she reaaly stands apart from most FMC, cause she's confident and she isnt afraid to be sexy I think.. most FMC are usually sarcastic/loners/virgins or all of the above not that there is anything wrong with that but a lot of those characters seem the same while Navleen's pretty unique.
I also adore Lucan, but I think you already got that:P
He's just über sexy, the whole tattoeed good looking smart funny guy, I mean what more could a girl want?!
Together, Lucan and Navleen are seriously hot!
The next chapter of this story is the one I most anticapate from any story on ~teh interwebz~! So keep up the good work !

I talk too much sometimes, I think :P

Before you continue with this story, I BEG you to add an epilogue to HAH. I ADORE that story and am sad that its length is only 13 chapters, from what I remember. I realy want this! Xmas present maybe? Lol, please?

I absolutely adore this story but not like I did HAH...

i love, love, love, this story!


Please update soon!!

Yay!!
That ending was so cute.
And haha dikshit is a funny name.
I don't really get what the golden rule is though >.>
that's from last chapter btw

THIS, THIS is gold.
there are just too many of my favourite lines.
And i'm not even halfway through the chapter yet!
the good nuggets joke from shalini was gold, and navleen's aunt is hilarious as well.
89, that's so typical!! xD

anyway going to keep reading the rest of this.
can't wait to get to the yummy part. damn i want him

absolutely in love with chap-vitch now.
wouldn't mind that piece of meat for myself.
*melts*

You have no idea how much I wished I could understand Hindi right now.
Seriously, this was bloody brilliant!
The way you descriptions, the humour, the blend of two languages is all very well done.
I could imagine everything quite clearly.
Moving onwards to read more chapters now.

Thanks for the story =)