This reader demands that the author updates immediately to avoid a potential mob-rising by the readers.

The ullu ka patha cracked me up. Mainly cuz I know someone who says ullu ka kutta instead. And the funniest thing about that is that that guy is a FOB.

God I this!
But I write oh-fo as uffo. I don't know, it just makes more sense to me.

Your story is amazing!
i would deffinately marry lucan!
:P

Omg i cant tell you how much i connect with this story.
Im indian to and i've never had anyone tell stories that i could laugh about and be like that happened to me last week!

Really being a girl in America or Canada
with indian parents is like a roller coster. lol
I LOVE YOU

I have probably read this story about 6 times already and everytime I do I laugh just as hard as the time before! I love Lucan, in HAH I loved him and his flirting with janie who didnt get the fact that he was flirting, I knew she would end up with Rafe so I hoped that you would write a story about Lucan cause he´s the **(my vocab isnt that elaborate this time at night) and here it is and I absolutely adore this story. It's funny, sexy, smart and all that good stuff. I love Navleen cause she reaaly stands apart from most FMC, cause she's confident and she isnt afraid to be sexy I think.. most FMC are usually sarcastic/loners/virgins or all of the above not that there is anything wrong with that but a lot of those characters seem the same while Navleen's pretty unique.
I also adore Lucan, but I think you already got that:P
He's just über sexy, the whole tattoeed good looking smart funny guy, I mean what more could a girl want?!
Together, Lucan and Navleen are seriously hot!
The next chapter of this story is the one I most anticapate from any story on ~teh interwebz~! So keep up the good work !

I talk too much sometimes, I think :P

Before you continue with this story, I BEG you to add an epilogue to HAH. I ADORE that story and am sad that its length is only 13 chapters, from what I remember. I realy want this! Xmas present maybe? Lol, please?

I absolutely adore this story but not like I did HAH...

i love, love, love, this story!


Please update soon!!

Yay!!
That ending was so cute.
And haha dikshit is a funny name.
I don't really get what the golden rule is though >.>
that's from last chapter btw

THIS, THIS is gold.
there are just too many of my favourite lines.
And i'm not even halfway through the chapter yet!
the good nuggets joke from shalini was gold, and navleen's aunt is hilarious as well.
89, that's so typical!! xD

anyway going to keep reading the rest of this.
can't wait to get to the yummy part. damn i want him

absolutely in love with chap-vitch now.
wouldn't mind that piece of meat for myself.
*melts*

You have no idea how much I wished I could understand Hindi right now.
Seriously, this was bloody brilliant!
The way you descriptions, the humour, the blend of two languages is all very well done.
I could imagine everything quite clearly.
Moving onwards to read more chapters now.

Thanks for the story =)

Haven't had an update on this in ages, which makes me sad!!... I just reread this whole thing and fell in love all over again with Lucan, Navleen, Navleen's mama, and Dickshit... :P I really really hope you haven't abandoned your writing, and that we can hope/wish/pray for an update soon?...

If you're posting elsewhere (ie: LJ)- seeing as a lot of authors have done so lately - I'd be happy to follow elsewhere!! Just let me know!... FP doesn't have a private message system, but you can find me on LJ with the same username! :)

Hope to hear from you soon!!

lovin it already

I think it's brilliant that the theme of coincidence is so blatantly obvious to drive home the idea.

And I think you had a bit too much fun with the horrible names. ;)