Really interesting, I like the idea and action. It got me hooked right away. You might just want to be sure you're editing this before it goes up. There are a few typo/spelling mistakes, nothing huge though.

You repeated this line twice: "No doubt, she disabled Project Footprint as it was her father's design"

Otherwise, pretty awesome.

Good plot line. The familiarity between the President and other characters distracts from his authority. I would recommend cutting back on the F word and adding more formality to the Presidency. Otherwise great work.

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Interesting plot. But, the grammar could use some work.

Ohh, that was interesting. And Elliot sounds like an attractive man. :D Sorry, can't help myself.

Your grammar needs a little work, but overall it was great. I have to go read a few chapters of Oliver Twist for English right now, but I'll read another chapter or two tomorrow.

I like it so far, very interesting. :)

I like Abba, - your a very talented writer

Gotta agree with toast, I wanna see this as a TV show. I'd watch it at 1am on a weekday. XD Awesome job.

I enjoyed this chapter as well even if I don't agree with what Abba and Eaton did. Can't wait for the next chapter. :D

Very good!

"You wanna fuck a redhead now or something?" made me laugh xD

I could easily see the story as a film or t.v programme,its so well done and it flows,it dosn't bog done on information which would slow down the story.

Why would Eaton attack america though? America is a close friend to Ireland and alot of americans gave money to help the IRA?

Anyway,great wait for more!

Wow... chapter four was awesome! I could really picture it in my head (including some things I really didn't want to see). Awesome job, keep it up - the detail and backstory really added to it.

Another good chapter. :D I'm interested in seeing where Liam and Fedoruk are going to play in with the basic plot of your story.

I LOVE IT! It's really good, love the aurthor note btw;) keep writing, your good!

Another good chapter Lee! :D Keep writing and I'll keep reading!

Lee,

this story is really good.

I liked it and it was very exciting.

-Simba!

Holy crap. I just saw the review I gave... now I know to never have PM pages and Review pages up at the same time. o.0 Failfailfail.

Anyways, awesome job. Really brings you in right from the beginning, especially since I'm totally ADD when it comes to anything past 1940. You've got great ideas, I can tell, just bring them out a little more and this could be a hit.