I really like your descriptions. There are easy to understand and very different. The only thing is the lines "Nobody there to tell me what/to do, what not to do."... that seemed almost like a positive thing so when you switched to negatives I was a tad confused.

Other than that really nice job.

PS You should should check out the Review Game. It's a great way to get reviews and the Review Marathon is this coming weekend! (links in my profile)