May I ask why you must be so very chast in the sence of suffering? We all do suffer at the mercy of the ignorant and closed minded...

"Pregnant silences miscarry." Jesus. Brilliant metaphor.

"Rat-a-tat-a-tick-tock hands." This reminded me of scat. Very creative. :)

"And Caroline, I miss you every day." The sadness and humanity in this line is very striking and beautiful.