HAHA! Take that prince charming!

Sadistically lovely! :)

It's very creative and completely unexpected. I loved it!

i agree with merry buterfly,let him think he can have the fruit then shut him out and let him only a glance at what he could have had. i love this poem a lot.

Ah, echoes of a 'Rose for Emily'... :D I like it- you led me on to think she was just a psychopath, but then you have to wonder about whether or not she's evil, because her boyfriend did cheat on her. My recommended revenge? Let him climb her hair, and when he's almost to the top, cut it off and let him drop to his doom.