This piece was fascinating to me, mostly because it is one of the rare pieces one can find on here that is not extremely "telling" - it seems to have many layers to it and, although I'm not sure I completely understand the piece, I appreciate the fact that it required some mental work on the part of the reader.

I absolutely loved the... well, here I was going to point out a few of the lines I loved but I actually found that all of them were amazing in terms of the use and flow of the English language. I would have to say, however, that my favourite verses were definitely the first and the last.

You are one to watch! Keep up the wonderful writing.

*KiaKha*, Bella