Awesome chapter! Keep up the great work, Update soon!

Another great chapter! Yay, so how old are they anyway? Hm, I dunno ae, im very bad at guessing this type of stuff. Your writing style is unique, and not overly discriptive or confusing or anything which is good! keep up the good work,. Cant wait for the next chapter. Update soon!

Ending of each chapter could be improved with more suspense but overall, cool storyline :D
I like Noel, haha.
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Great first chapter! Hm, I must say that 5'10 isnt really that tall :P Well not to me any way. But I suppose it depends. Maybe I come from a place where people I know are abnormally tall. Or maybe thats just me and my "wish it could be true" world. Haha, Im so rambling. Any way great first chapter, im so moving onto the next one!

I like this story.:))
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