it wasn't bad. . .

well except for the fact that in the poem it mensions that you killed someone and that even though you feel guilt you still don't care about the person.

you have real talen writing poems (:

i absolutley love them, whether they are real events or not, they're simply wonderful.

keep writing forever (:

"Then again

I know you hate backstabbing

Just as much as me

You’d rather

Just sneakily

Send an arrow

Clean through my front"

LOVE that:) And yes, it was quite long, but it told a story, and those kinds of things can't be rushed or summarized. Beautiful, darling.

Write on!

This is... BEAUTIFUL! It's amazing, perfect, I loved the ending, and just all of it. As I've said before I think: You are a really good poet! Word almost cannot discribe how good this is!

I really liked it, the title was awesome, the message was clear, and I loved the the last three lines the most out of all of it. Yeah, it was long, but when you have something to say, then you just have to say it, I guess. D