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bumblebot 2009-03-18 . chapter 1
I like the last stanza the best, especially the 'stolen honesty' part.

I have to say, in a few places, your line breaks seem a little detrimental to the flow of the poem.
Andrea Lotte 2009-03-15 . chapter 1
I quite like this, especially the way it ends. The last stanza is definitely my favourite. Nice work!
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