Very interesting start! I can't wait to see what else you have planned here!

...that's it? Must cry.

DUDE MAN GOOD STORY GOOD STORY!

Wow, You know how i hate reading how everything is just so boning but sitting here reading this its just great i mean some times you just got to go off the beaten path a try something new.This chapter of Raimi and Kaden was really good it took me a while to read and comprehend it but i really enjoyed reading this and cant wait till the next part comes out. Keep up the good work and i miss ya :P!

So you better update this story soon XD cause it looks like it's about to get interesting! Poor Kaden though XD probably going to have a heart attack.