I think Chiomi's poem was definitely the best but Myriad came as a close second.

Shoot, I think I'm too late. But either way, I want to express some love for Mari's. :)

I vote for Mari's tanka.

I liked Chiomi's best.

Best: Holly Williams
Creative: Mari
Technical: Myriad

I'm going to have to vote for Myriad's - it conveys two defined scenes, in a very confined space, which is hard to do well. And the polyptoton - 'still stilled,' the same word with multiple endings - works well; I've never seen that done in English.

It was close, though; I really enjoyed these.

Myriad

This was probably my favorite. Yay for Spring!