haha. good little humour piece. like something that might appear in a book of children's poems.

it's the first happy-ish thing i've read in too long. thank you.

"despite it's fleas"
should be
"despite its fleas"
(but then again, i'm just a grammar freak. so never mind. :))

Aha! I absolutly loved this! Made my night. Got a little long at the end, which messed a little bit with the cadence. But overall fantastic! Please write more!! :D

XD
That was SO funny!
I loved it!
A little bit of childish lit. to brighten the day, eh?
You had a spelling error in your summary: freind should be 'frIEnd' ^^ that's about it that I saw.
welp. it was amusing and I wish I could read more =P

yours,
centuriespast