Cute story! I know a little girl just like that little fox! I like that there's a moral to the story, a good lesson for any child to learn.

I see a few grammar errors;

“I’ll eat them later then.” Said the young fox, and he trotted off to play --> should be ...eat them later then," said the...

“You’ll get sick and weak if you don’t eat them.” The nanny said. --> see above.

“Terrible.” The nanny said,-->see above

“I don’t like greens, their so gross!” said the kit -->they are so gross.

After the kit got sent to be the..-->sent to bed


Cute story :)

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aw, that was really sweet! I love the pics--too bad you cant post them on, they're really cute!!

Love the moral. All in all, the story was fantastic! Good job!

*Midnight-Wolfe*