|Reviews for Repost|
| Shitty Ass Writing 9/23/09 . chapter 1
Crap. that the only word for this story. it is so stupid and badly written i am amazed i mean this makes forbidden look good yeah its just that bad.
| Half-Blood Metamorphmagus 9/16/09 . chapter 1
Oh My God. :O
If you ever publish this or something, let me know! I loved everything in this, and it looks just amazing! Seriously, keep going on. I really liked the way you described his feelings, they are really true. Just keep writing this story, it looks amazing. D
Keep up the good work and don't stop writing! D
| An Inside Joke 3/16/09 . chapter 1
You've got a really intriguing set-up here. You've arosed just the right amount of curiosity about the computer program, while cueing the reader in on the main charecter's psychosis. You used a lot of adverbs and adjectives - to the degree where they often felt overused. The action and thought-sequence is interesting enough for the reader to feel drawn into the story. The descriptors just feel overused and clunky with the rest of the story, but otherwise, good start.
| tonight we bloom 3/16/09 . chapter 1
Wow, I really loved this! You have such great narration and I love the style of your writing, long descriptive sentences with a few short choppy ones for emphasis. Loved it, you have talent!
I just recently posted 2 stories and I would really appreciate it if you could read and review with honest feedback or suggestions. Opinions from a writer like you would mean the world to me!