This is simply beautiful, such a sullen and morbid ending...yet it fit in a twisted way. I feel so sorry for the characters in this, really great writing.

This was a nice story. I like how the lyrics go with the story. There were so many lines in this story that i liked.

And by the time the sun has risen, the wind will have wiped all traces of our encounter from the face of the earth.

My favourite line.

I don't know why, but this part's going to be in my mind for sometime.

“You know I’ll think of him.”

“I know.”

“You’ll think of her.”

“Yeah.”

“It won’t last.”

“It doesn’t have to.”

Anyways. I think you did a good job in writing this one-shot. I look forward to reading more of your stories.