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DAMNED-LIKE-BEAUTY 2009-03-19 . chapter 1
OMG lol I LOVE THESE 2 he he he power ** lol who would have thought :D
DLB
frogs of war 2009-03-17 . chapter 1
"Forcing his was through" way?

"asked quietly, so as to be overheard by anyone else." as to not be?

Going at it in a public place just doesn't do anything for me (since the time the cops knocked on the car window).

Wouldn't this have been the perfect time for Luke to top?

I was wondering when Eric would fall asleep.

Eric should stick to cuddling at least until Luke stops aching.

Entertaining as always. Keep up the good work.
LeahDude 2009-03-17 . chapter 1
Hey. This is really good - I can't wait if you're writing more. The end really made me laugh. Thanks for writing and posting :]
Dark-Hunter2009 2009-03-17 . chapter 1
Hey,
Just wanted to say that that was amazing and the end was funny made me lol.
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