Gah where have you been? -__- lol Well anyway I never have anything very constructive to say but Im glad you're back and that you posted another chapter =] Of course I loved it XD but I'd jus liked to know for future reference how often you'll be posting? Keep up the good work! ><
-YFP

HEHEHE! THAT WAS HILARIOUS!

Those therapy sessions sound *awesome*!

I think Lio just became one of my favorite characters.

Yay, update! I dont really like the fact that he told she was insane, surely she would realise that will make her parents treat her like shes insane, and not let her do anyhting? Also isnt the phychologist just doing that thing where theyre try to act like one of you and let you think that they dont think you're insane, to get you to spill your secrets? Because thats what its seems like and i wouldnt think that Helana would fall for that, like she did. But i do think its quite funny and realistic that her parents came to this conclusion and now im curious to know how this is the 'beginning of Origins plot.' Cant wait for the Seth chapter! :D

omg, it's been forever since you updated. I was starting to wonder if you had stopped writing or not, until I got a mail from fictionpress saying, that you updated.
I kinda forgot about the characters in this story dice I haven't been reading this for quite some time. so maybe i'll reread
the first story these few days.
I was so happy that you finaly updated. I wish this chapter was longer though, but it's better than noting right?
the part where hels' mom and Tod thinks that she is attempting suicide made me laugh, ahah.
and I like Lio, he seems like a good guy. I how he stays in the story.

I can't wait for your next update, so please update soon yeah? :D

haha that was great-way to get her step-dad back good and proper huh?!

Hello!
I kind of like, kind of don't trust Lio... I hope he won't be the bad guy, thoug.
This chapter has some past/present tense mistakes (like "Mom says" instead of "Mom said" or "I whisper" instead of "I whispered") maybe you should look through it again.
Greetings

This was a Hilarious chapter, and I can't wait for the next update and who doesn't love Seth Lol, and I also like the way that Therapist thinks too, I would have a Ball tricking someone like that...Lol

hey sky! I have been wandering where you have been! How is it going for you?! Cant believe you 18! I missed you alot! This story is great but im really confuzzled on what the plotline is! drop me aline! Best of luck with life


-TiggerGurl

I love trick, both the character and the story. Can't wait for an update!

Your good friend Benna-Chan or just Beena I'm not sure what you know her as... Maybe Hssanya... anyway she made me read your story Trick (she's crazy I tell you CRAZY!) but after the first few chapters I actually found myself really getting into it. I love the way you write. You have a very entertaining style and your humor is to die for. Reading this story now I am dissapointed it isn't finished and thus have to sign you with fictionpress. Not that I am oo bothered. It might give me a reason to actually start writing my own stuff (Beena-Chan has been trying to get me to write my own stuff ever since she read some of my 'original-fanfics, which are basically using the characters of a previously written story with a unique plot.)

But on the note of fanfictions - I take offence to that little remark of yours on behalf of some of my good friends and fellow fanfic authors. Not all preteens write crappy fanfics, and you have to excuse some that do because you can't REALLY expect a 10-13 year old to be well read and able to write an original story as perfectly crafed as this one is. I also didn't see how this one was cheesy at all. Maybe if I were to deconstruct it I could see it but you craft it so well that it blends in and becomes part of the story effortlessly and anything that has been used before if there was any fades into the background because the reader is so caught up in the story of the characters and how they are all interacting with each other. Anyho - can't wait for the next chapter - and you really should print out Trick and see what publishers say (It is a book I would buy and read a dozen times over even thoiugh I have already read it). I won't say that to this one cause I want to read it first!

Hi. I don't know if you got my first message but someone is ripping your story 'Trick' off. The prolouge is only slighty diffrent but the beginnig is just like yours from Trick. here's the link. http://w(dot)fictionpress(dot)com/s/2711241/1/Untitled

:O dam the other stealers of trick!

*shakes fist*

I still like the german lol.
even if i dont speak a word of it.
haha
- Erin

im so confused! :P Love it