Great job rewriting! I like how you didn't do that big jump like in the old version. You get to see how she deals with her ex's betrayal. Plus I like that there are more details added within the text. Can't wait to read more! :-)

O they are going to have fun, something fun ALWAYS happens at the club ;)

Good chap!

Good chapter!
Excited for the next chapter though ;)

I'm glad I've started on the rewrite!

Looks to be a good chapter! Damn girls can be such **!

OK so in honesty i can't remember in dteail how it started originally but you went into just the right amount of detail so you did well. can't wait until the next one is up!

Kat x

Its good so far
Question though...Is it going to be in third person through the whole story?
And will it be following the same story as the earlire one?

well this looks like a good start
hope to read more :D