wow. that was great, very... i don't know, chilling. yup, thats it. chilling. in a completly awesome way.

hehe cool!! very angsty, Dani (look I know how to use that word! :coughAlexiscough:). Yeah so liked the whole thing it was really cool w the different perspective and all. . . last line's my favorite. Definitely the at one yup...

ok too much sugar and pain...hm...byebye!

I can relate to this poem. I like it.

"feigning art/to create the perfect look of misunderstood" would have to be my favorite line because of all the angsty drama that has come upon the younger generation.
the imagery is very nice, indeed.
Y&R

Wow, very raw and in your face, but done in a smart way, great job. I've never seen a poem about angst from this point of view, and I must say it was a good surprise. Again, great job, you should be proud, Peace