It's interesting, but seems rushed in some ways. Also, it seems like it would be served well by some more description - talk about the kids, and talk about the house. Other than that, it's fine.

heh.. neat concept. Could use some tweaking in a few parts, just to really clarify things, but it came out pretty good overall. Good job! :)

this wouldnt happen to be an autobiography... would it??

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